Can you start out with yes on a SAT essay?

by Rodney on September 6, 2009

its a practice SAT Essay…
and i want to know does this sound okay?

Creativity is needed more than ever in the world. I believe that creativity gives different views, and helps us to see things in a much more postive way. I aslo believe, creativity can be seen in more than just a traditional way of doing or seeing something.

Is that okay to start out with?
my Assignment was "is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?"

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1 Gavinϟ September 6, 2009 at 3:25 am

I agree with mmm64983 or whatever.

Creativity is needed more than ever in the world. I believe that creativity gives different views, and helps us to see things in a much more postive way. I aslo believe, creativity can be seen in more than just a traditional way of doing or seeing something.

*Creativity is needed more than ever in the world. Creativity gives different views, and helps us to see things in a much more postive way. It can be seen in more than just a traditional way of doing or seeing something.

That sounds better.

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